Aloha, Talofa and Hello to all! Today I will attempt to enter in the Ako Hiko poetry slam I have worked hard and challenged myself to write this poem about the sea since it is sea week I tried to write a poem about seaweek. If you would like to here my poem here it is:
Hope you enjoy it!
Ka rawe Arielle. I love the rhymes you've used in your poem and I particularly enjoyed the ending. Have you checked out some of the other poems in the Poetry Slam?
ReplyDeleteHi, Arielle my name is Lotte. This poem is amazing I really love the sea thats why I chose this one. Rhyming poems are some of my Favourite. Do you like rhyming poems too? You should denfentily check out some of the other poems!
ReplyDeleteHi Arielle, That is the best poem I've heard about the sea.
ReplyDeleteI really like how many rhyming words you found and put in there.
You brought me back to the time when I made a poem about my first day of school.
I think you might take those fish out of the bubbles because there's no reason why they have to be there.
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Excellent comment Yuvaan. I like how you've been positive, thoughtful and helpful. This will really help Arielle with their learning.
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